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The Swan

The Swan 

Near feathers in the wind.
I stare as she slowly drifts into the shadows of yesterday. 
She is not me
She is not you!

A theme, like morning upon a crystal view.
She is of the wind
She is of the sun
She is the moon
She is the magic in your eyes.

Tonight she sits on the calm waters of your reflection.
Tonight she makes love to you.
Tonight she listens and counts the rhythm in your heartbeat.
She is a thief and steals every single breath from your body and soul...
And Still -
She is the night air 
She is the tranquil sound
She is perfect
She is mighty in your eyes.

You are the oceans
In you, she swims with trust.
You hold on to the tides, 
You keep her feathers dry and warm.
You stray her away from the sadness in a lost dance.
The aches under her wings belong to the shade in your heart.
That is why-
She is the grace
She is the smile
She is the fire
She is everything in your eyes.

Graceful feathers in the wind.
The dream of dreams
She might be me!
She might be you!
"Till Death Do We Part."

“The Swan”
-the symbol of everlasting love-

By;pd

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  1. Date: 3/20/2014 8:47:00 PM

    Lovely piece, beautiful!

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 4:17:00 PM

    Great Poem. It dances with singing suns to soothe sullen stars in lucid night.

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 7:00:00 AM

    Hi Linda, the swan, a most beautiful and elegant bird. Why should not such a one be the symbol of the eternal Love. Once more your words paint such lovely visions, the swan softly gliding upon them into the minds of the readers. You have written this one in such an eloquent style. Now, these are indeed beautiful pictures for one to hold in the galleries of the mind, to watch again and again. You always take creativity to a new level. Have a good day, Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 6:52:00 PM

    Linda Such a beautiful and creative write. The imagery and descriptive words allows the reader to see themselves right next to this gorgeous bird. Nice job

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:42:00 PM

    A very graceful and romantic poem, Linda! Very beautifully written! I wish that I could write as effortlessly as you do!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem! I really appreciate it, my friend!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:18:00 AM

    Always knowing how to bring your thoughts in a perfect and grand style. Nicely done P.D. Thanks for your visit once again,I appreciate. Love and hugs.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 1:17:00 AM

    Swans are graceful, beautiful, and loyal---and they can fly---just like some people. Great poem pd.

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:01:00 AM

    Certainly, the sight and mere thought of beautiful swans awake one's poetic senses...your piece is a perfect example of such..lovely and gracefully done, my friend ^_^ -- Wendy

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 12:57:00 AM

    nicely done Linda ;}

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 8:14:00 AM

    Hi, my evrdearest sis! Good morning & Big sweetest morning hugs to you! I''ve been around the soup for almost an hour now but haven't done much 'cuz of my shaky screen..don't know why. How are you? Hope you're doing great & at zenith of good health & everything. Well, reading again this stunning precious gem of yours has graced my night. Thank you thank you so much again & for everything. Well, I wish you & your love ones a very wonderful & gracefilled day! God bless & tcare! lovem4evrLeonora

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 1:52:00 PM

    dancing on the wings beautiful piece

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 12:14:00 PM

    I swim in the air/ And dance on the waters/ I cool off in the sun/ And sweat on the moon/ My feathers/ Are your lather/ And my gaze/ Catches your fire/ When you're in my arms/ That's to conspire/- (I immersed in contrasts to grasp the original-that is love,which you have penned with grace)-

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:06:00 PM

    A beautiful write. Such imagery. I could languish in these words for hours. The love is palpable. thanks. LInda for a great poem. Kilmer

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 3:41:00 PM

    I love swans, we have beautiful big black ones here. A perfect write Linda....Peter

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:34:00 AM

    Outstanding poem, absolutely stunning,, yes the swan the symbol of eternal love, beautifully word matching the symbolic ness of the swan, imagery beautiful, I so enjoyed read this poem, blessing to you my friend, hugs sueellen

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 5:51:00 AM

    The swan is such a graceful, poised and beautiful creature. God must have had a reason for it to be the symbol of everlasting love :) I love the natural flow of your words. I loved the lines- "A theme, like morning upon a crystal view. She is of the wind She is of the sun She is the moon She is the magic in your eyes." Good job & keep writing! xoxo Dipika

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 1:03:00 AM

    Hi Linda, Eloquent write as I read it twice..I once read where the swan,like the soul of the poet, by the dull world is ill understood...I added this to my list of favorites... :) Your new friend in poetry, Ken...

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Very seductive--with a hint of you behind and between the lines;

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:18:00 AM

    this reminds me of the film "The Black Swan" its about a ballerina who plays the innocent and fragile White Swan, and all-so as the dark and sensual Black Swan, who lose her grip on reality! (played Natalie Portman) Just wonderful- I love this Poem

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 10:01:00 AM

    All white and silently floating by - this swan has triggered a vivid, wonderful imagination. Great stuff PD. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:41:00 PM

    Obviously only a fantastic female could write something like that with all of that feeling. Men are often to coarse and without feeling at all. It does come out in me occasionally though. Thanks for your positive comment about my second poem of the week. How did you find out about it? It was just posted yesterday

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 7:37:00 AM

    Such a beautiful description of eternal love

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 3:47:00 PM

    so beautiful you took me there Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:23:00 AM

    WOW... how nice to stop by here and to enjoy your fabulous poem.. thank you sweetheart Linda :) for your supports and sharing <3 Fabulous Write <3 Sk

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 6:51:00 AM

    you can easily be this swan i picture you on a river gliding on a lake, tail towards heaven and little feet under water treading the waters, always a smile when u + my mind xxxvxxx

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 3:47:00 AM

    hey i really like your poem thanks for commenting mine last time i can be your friend

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:44:00 PM

    hello my friend,very nice read thank you .just stop by to say hello and thank you very being the kind wonderful caring person that you is , thank you very your kind words to me,take care and good bye

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Love is many things and none can paint it like you! Astonishing poem, thank you for the inspiration. Hakim

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 3:22:00 PM

    I love swans,,,,, hey I ran into this monkey about 5 minutes ago ;}

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:36:00 AM

    An excellent poem here Linda.Enjoyed very much.

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