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Silent By The Sea

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Silent By The Sea

I stood in silence by the sea
Where the dolphins lip the shores
Where seagules in their glee
On the vacant waves explores.

Through the swaying breeze
I sang her name as a love song
And it drew upon the seas
On the tides it drifts along.

Where on lustrous field she sat
To welcome the notes of my love
When the day has long depart
She'd send me a note of love.

When my heart is at its lowest
From the skies she'd comfort me
With a form that glows the brightest
As I stand silent by the sea.


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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 2:36:00 PM

    Hi Mustapha, sometimes the words are hard to find for you shall write something that can touch a gossamer memory and stir feelings within me, long forgotten, thought lost in the velvet dark of time. This is one such piece my friend. I sang to her every day believing she would return across the sea but it was not meant to be, a drunk fool and a car saw to that. She is one of the silver cords within my Soul. Another amazing write. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 10:38:00 AM

    What can I say? I simply loved it. You are absolutely brilliant, my friend :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 2:17:00 AM

    This reads like a beautiful song, and the imagery is awesome…I spend a lot of my free time by the sea, and I somehow relate to the mood of this poem in certain ways.. you know, solo moments not particularly with my love in mind, but then, the moment romances your soul, and you sometimes are so convinced that if you are meant to be alone, its because you perfect the moment only that way.. Thank you for the lovely read!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Very beautiful imagery in this poem! And, great rhyme and flow to the words. A very enjoyable poem to read. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 5:12:00 PM

    Ahh!! This one has such great poetic qualities..Enjoyed reading it today...I am glad that I chose ti to read..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence always uplifts my spirits...Sara

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 7:14:00 PM

    Thus her name sways in the breezed The secret of your raving poet-ease Your poems are easy on the eyes xxx Rose xxx

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 10:40:00 PM

    Love this! pretty poem! :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:28:00 PM

    I stood in silence by the sea Where the dolphins lip the shores Where seagules in their glee On the vacant waves explores. seagules should be seagulls and explores should be explore to agree with verb tense. Regardless, you have a superb control of thoughts and ideas that you have transformed over into poems. Do you think that you inherited this great talent? Jim Horn jthorn5656@atmc.net It is beyond just being pretty. It does a great imagination cloaked with a lot of creativity.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:20:00 PM

    I really like this one. It's so pretty.