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My Sunshine

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My Sunshine

As a stormy cloudy day, my heart filled with a dark gloomy, foggy haze.
Breathless and no longer living my flesh was deaf and disintegrating fast.
Lifeless, and buried deeply sunken; upon my grave.
My spirits formed as dying weeds, uprooted planted seeds.
Brittle and fragile as a crisp rose petal.
Dehydrate raindrops that have fallen from my tear ducts.
My soul was as dark as the dirt that lay on my grave.
I lay in darkness with no movement.
Then the earth shifted.
As he gently brushed off my layers of crust, small thin layers of trust.
Lifted me from my darkness dust, my sunshine has come.
In a form of a man, skin golden as sand.
He takes my hand as I carried off to dry land.
As his sunrays beam down upon me, I am profoundly happy.
Liberation of sunlight, deliverance of brightness, I am out the darkness.
Reincarnation I am rebirth a new person.
My sunshine has come there is no more rain in my heart.
 All cried out lifted by his sunlight.
I have life born again as his wife.

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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 8:10:00 PM
    Beautifully written, Twanna. Deep expression with honest imagery. Great choice of words, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 2:26:00 PM
    This is very beautifully written :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Excellent imagery, very impactful and romantic.

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 8/20/2013 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard.
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:56:00 PM
    This was incredible. Very well written. Im excited to read more of your poems. Thanks for stopping by my pieces and your great comments...means a lot. You very talented.

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 8/20/2013 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwwww thank you. :)
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 10:43:00 AM
    This is art!!! I truly love your work...please keep posting!!!

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 6/10/2013 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    (big smile) :) I love your work also.