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tempest - - -

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tempest - - -

undulating waves rise and fall, drenching whirlwind twister destroys life . . . flames blaze in the night June 8, 2013 Kimo For the contest, Haiku Wannabee's

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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Constance, I am just now seeing that this one won in Deb's contest. Big belated congrats to you on a very deserved win. Hope you are ok. Haven't seen a new poem from you in a while.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:41:00 PM
    I loved the word undulating! Three strong images yet unconnected each one could make a whole kimo or haiku. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:56:00 PM
    I like that you combined all three in one great piece. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Wow, this is an impressive write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this powerful poem this afternoon! I love how you put in the elements of water, wind, and fire into this piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:33:00 AM
    Strong imagery, i like. Rick

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:45:00 PM
    Good to see another one from you, constance. I rarely use the list of poem-new. But it's kind of fun to skim down it when I have a little time.