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Below is the poem entitled Bloodwoman which was written by poet Karan Patade. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Bloodwoman

When the night comes,
and the world is a away,
the demons step out,
as their corpses decay.

Across Will-street,
lived a mysterious sinner.
A famous voice,
whose faintest whisper made the mighty shiver.

Her long gold locks,
made many a man weak,
till he knew her up close,
where no one could hear his helpless shriek.

Burning lust,
disappeared in her embrace,
then moving swiftly,
dripping blood from her long nails.

She was her daddy's girl, people say,
till she hit him with a gun.
No man could ever escape,
the trap of this woman.

Courage, don't be weak,
don't let your young heart loose.
She is waiting till the night birds call,
she has her sight on the whole town view.

Widows always weep,
the young is red meat,
when she kills all the sinners,
she is the bad woman.
When your daddy is cheap,
you ought to be weak,
but she is not a dying soul,
she is Bloodwoman.

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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 9:33:00 PM
    I like your poem Karan, the poem reads with deep dramatic melancholia as well as the feeling of something old when it comes to blood woman, a very familiar way and stretch. This is great xox Linda

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 6/12/2013 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda !!
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Hi Karan, wow! courage, and much to think of.......... this one is great. I will come back and read the poem from my computer.............*Skat

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 6/12/2013 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you SKAT, yea I wrote Bloodwoman for women and I am glad you like it.