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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 1:29:00 PM
    This poem somehow takes me back to a book i once read called The Thorn Birds..Maybe i am mislead cause im not as smart as you are..infact you will see my poetry is very simple..But is this man described in your poem a man of God ? Intriguing poem..where her scent seems to linger and his burning soul ascends.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 10:06:00 AM
    This poem is deep and fascinating. Your rhymes are perfect. I envy your ability in writing rhymes so perfect

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:44:00 AM
    Hello Giorgio, the first 4 lines drew me in. very intense, and of course seeing the city of Corpus Christi, on the 8th line was amazing. I had to read the poem twice. you have a very smooth and deep style. I wish we shared the same ticks on the clock. this moment is special... thank you very much...xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:29:00 AM
    Hello G, can you believe I'm still awake... I'm on strike. LOL... wow, it's pass 1:30 here... I'm having a midnight snack, maybe i will sleep in an our or so... Linda