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Spinning World

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Spinning World

Tonight, the big bright hanging moon is smiling
My spinning world is singing, lovingly accepting your ring

©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 8/1/2013 1:45:00 PM
    With a tone like this who could doubt the winner.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 8:35:00 AM
    superb congrats on win Shadow x smiles

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stoppind..means a lot...
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:11:00 AM
    This is very good and Congrts. on your win..... Lucilla

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well...no win...but thanks Lucilla...I feel like a winner cause my friends liked it!
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Hey, I thought I had seen all the winners by now but I don't see my congratulations down here, so I'm telling you now: WELL DONE!!! and congrats my friend.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well...thanks...but I didn't win....:-) :-) or even place!!!!!...but glad you liked it...that is ALL that matters..
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 7:59:00 AM
    congrats on your win Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well Joseph ...nice thought ...but mine wasn't good enough to place....maybe next time
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:33:00 PM
    Excellent. Very romantic write. Tfs

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much..
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Good Morning and I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Richard....canning green beans...35 pints I think it was...and spending time with dad....awesome...peanut butter fudge!!!!!
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 2:33:00 PM
    Oh so sweet dear Donna!!! A true romantic you are... big big hugs... Jake xoxox

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwww....thanks..:-)
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 9:57:00 AM
    How beautiful!!!!!! What a capture of a memorable moment!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake....much appreciated
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 6:56:00 AM
    Romantically sweet and precious! :) Good luck on this lovely write, MD! I'm sure you will do well! You're a winner in my book! HUGS!!!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/16/2013 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    If my friends liked it...that is what counts....thanks
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 2:11:00 AM
    My brain connected your lovely write to these lyrics from the Police "Walking back from your house, walking on the moon."

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Its how I felt! Hey thanks!
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 6:04:00 PM
    This is lovely Donna, the kind of memory worth hanging on to. Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well, no bananas' but fun to rite...thanks Richard
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Lovely and romantic!!! made me smile! :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thanks Carrie...
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Dropping by to say good morning Donna, hugs Rick.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/12/2013 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes tha is wonderful.
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/12/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning..have a great one!!...at first I made a typo and the computer changed it to God's morning...isn't that wonderful! :-)
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:06:00 PM
    So much said in these two beautiful lines, Donna...I can feel your joy coming through...Reads like a winner! - Tim

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/11/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thanks Tim....it was a good night...:-)
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:47:00 AM
    How romantic, I think this is a definate winner. Amazing how much can be conveyed in just two lines.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/12/2013 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are kind.
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/11/2013 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks richard, but I don't think it touches your worn out shoes!!!! That was awesome!!!!
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Ahh!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading your great rhyming couplets..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/11/2013 9:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Sara...glad you are back
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:59:00 AM
    so loving simple and beautiful gl in contest

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/11/2013 9:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you friend..
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:06:00 AM
    Great entry for this one , Donna. Engagement or promise ring?...;)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/10/2013 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well not better just different!!!!!
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/10/2013 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Promise ring...things never get better than prom nite..right?????
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:22:00 PM
    -You are proficient, Donna! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/9/2013 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you....not nearly as good as so many...just trying to join in....but thanks!!!
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