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The Wet Day

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The Wet Day

Rough the dripping leaves does swing
Upon the sullen breeze cold fluttering.
From frowning skies clouds does blast
Silver rain drops approaching so fast.

When blossoming buds had lightly swayed
In lustrous the vacant blushing glade.
The last white rose falls on holy ground
As soft a feather and light as down.

My gentle thoughts then streams aloof
Beneath the glimmered drumming roof.
How fogged the morning seem to pant
How wet the morning fields and plants.

That stilled my feet from toil today
To plow the lands thats light and gay.
The skies above it barks and groans
Until the golden sun of morn returns.

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  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:08:00 PM

    Hi M, I.m one of the idiots who used to go out walking in the storm, my only excuse being, it helped me think. It's funny how things can change as you grow older. Like you say the rain comes but there will be another morn' when the sun will come out and you walk out into a glistening world. Beautiful thoughts my friend. You have a nice day, Your friend, MIKE. Catch you later.

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 9:03:00 AM

    a lovely way to end it with such awaiting beauty of that's suns return, enjoyed your write, ~always, Linda

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/22/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda.
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:56:00 PM

    Even better than the first one I've read. Stunning imagery in this one! For me there are two kinds of people... people that embrace the storms with open arms or those that hope and pray they go away soon... I guess both perspectives are reasonable. Thunder's a beautiful sound, but the damage can't just be brushed off as nothing...

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/9/2013 4:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Timothy I just love your wonderful thoughts in this comment my friend.Wishing you a fantastic day with lots of smiles champ. Thanks my friend.
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:49:00 PM

    M & M, "Beneath the glimmered drumming roof " I fav this line xxx xxx Rose xxx

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/9/2013 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That line was probably the hardest one to spring forth.Thanks my friend.
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Nice nature poem.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/8/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey dear Christine,nice to see you.Wishing you a wonderful day.
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 8:16:00 AM

    This past storm was a a wet one. Thank goodness for the sun (the energy from which caused the storm in the first place). The cycle continues.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/8/2013 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank goodness we dont have stormy weather across here my friend.I hope you're all prepared Duke.