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my life time partner

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my life time partner

The crowd was so much
Yet you found me
The noise was very loud
Yet you recognized my voice
The road was so dark
Yet you led me through
I am happy you are my life time partner

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Sometimes so much can be said in few words. To be content with one's life is all anyone can really hope for. Your poem made me smile and feel good about life.

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/19/2013 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliments.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Olivia, Very direct and to the point, I would have liked a bit more on this poem as it seemed a little short of being great. John

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/12/2013 3:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    John, I am you had a bit of it. Love is the greatest healer.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Hi Olivia, i am thrilled to have you as a friend....... and I have myself a life time partner, we are not always happy, but we are together.......... I am going to enjoy following your poetry............*Skat

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/12/2013 3:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I mean love will do greater things foe you. just belive in it. Even if the rainbow surface be hopeful that your love will surely fall on the wings of a dove.
    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/12/2013 3:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Skat, will do greater for you,just believe in it. Even if the rainbow surface be hopeful that your will surely fall on the wings of love.
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Wow! Such a concise and cool piece, this is a creative work. Keep it up!! Love hears the inaudible, sees the invisible and does the imposible! It's great to read your piece this evening Olivia, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. It's a platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke

    Nimley Avatar Olivia Nimley
    Date: 6/10/2013 1:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Adeleke, thanks for the compliments. It's my passion to touch every heart positively with creativity.