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written 5th april 2013

I sent a prayer, from deep in my soul
 it was answered, by our God
I was going to heal, my heart of sorrow
 but, she's not coming tommorow
Lies, lies, lies

I love you mum
 your actions, I do dispise
Hope, joy and peace filled my heart
 to hear "your voice say, you were coming to visit

Bouncing with such joy
 I felt like a child, receiving a new toy
Now tears feel my eyes
 you lied, you lied, you lied

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  1. Date: 6/8/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Love this poem because I can actually feel your tears. Other than the extra "c" in coming you did a good job with this one. Kim