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My Very First Time

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My Very First Time

I am now remembering
The very first time for me
Was it like this for you?
I bet it was you see …

We are not so different
From each other as we think
We all do good and bad things
Others do things that stink …

It’s the first time ever
I am trembling with delight
There is a fear in me
Will everything be alright?...

Will I really regret this?
Will it be the best ever?
Will I ever forget it? 
I think the answer’s never…

But we all have a first time
And this is how mine went
Shame excitement and blushes
And there were some things got bent…

It will never be the same
As that very first time
Legs in the air
Some think it was a crime…

But the rush and the excitement
Lives with me still
As I fell off my bike
And rolled down that hill …

© ~GG~ 08/06/2013



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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 10:32:00 AM

    Hmmmm, so that's what they mean when they say once you learn to ride a bicycle, you never forget...OMG... congratulations, Mandy... You got more than a snicker outa me with this one.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 3:10:00 PM

    'Legs in the air' and then, wham!..You hit us with another surprise ending...Got a nice giggle out of this little gem...Congratulations my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 10:16:00 AM

    One thinks she knows what this is all about........such a clever "hmmmm..."....did I assume too much?? lol !!! Well done!!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Hi Mandy, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ always & forever * LINDA

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:21:00 AM

    MANDY, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME POEM. *LUV ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:38:00 AM

    Heehee lol..You put a smile on my face..The first time i fell of my bike i ached with pain but my first time blushing was when i fell on a first date.I was wearing a long coat and high heels..It rained cats and there i fell on my arse..rigjt beside the cinema ..in the street.Where there any people?Plenty :)

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 10:53:00 PM

    hahahaha, LOVE IT. Fave.

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 8:07:00 PM

    adorable! i knew this wasn't about the obvious, but was delighted by the ending anyway...

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Oh you are back to your old tricks Girl, but still enjoyed, well not rolling down the hill maybe!!!!

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 3:02:00 PM

    I love the twist. It gave me a chuckle, this delightful poem. Smashing Manding. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 1:53:00 PM

    This had me very exited until the last verse. Great write as usual.

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Love the surprise ending! Good one, Mandy! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 5:39:00 AM

    - ... everything has a "first" time ..... But what is life without daring to try ... - Feel the blood "fizz" .... see the stars of happiness .. - Very well written poem Mandy. - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 5:22:00 AM

    nice write Mandy....i knew it would be a surprise ending...best wishes