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Butterfly Kisses

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Butterfly Kisses

To touch someone’s eyelashes with your own up close to their face, now isn’t that silly? I can just hear all the virile men groan. . . Butterfly kisses with one’s date? Really? To tell you the truth, I’d not even heard of butterfly kisses until one fine day, and I might even have found it absurd had someone most special not kissed me that way! But there was a boy one night that I chose to go on a date with - a flirtatious tease. He said, “Let’s rub noses and be Eskimos” and playfully put my young self at ease. And then he said, “Kiss me like a butterfly.” I giggled when he drew his face close to mine. Both our lashes were long, and on our first try our lashes were kissing; was it divine? I won’t lie and tell you it was complete bliss, but soon in my stomach there strongly fluttered new butterflies from our first full-mouth kiss, and I sighed with every sweet word he uttered. He said, “Close your eyes” and then kissed both of my eyelids so tenderly how could I know if it were anything other than love and, madly, I wished he never would go. With eyes now wide open, I mirrored the touch of his hands like butterflies, wanting to trace my every feature. His eyes said so much as my hands caressed his own beautiful face! His mouth on my neck, his breath at my ear, his lips on my lips; I’d now tasted bliss! What a boy from Quebec had taught me was clear: Romance can take flight from a butterfly kiss. For Gail Angel Doyle's Butterfly Kisses Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:58:00 PM
    I love butterfly kissing but I love kisses that give us butterflies even more and that first ever kiss Still rates as a real butterfly moment.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 2:21:00 PM
    † Tis Something About A Soft As Tender, Brushing Kiss, 'Pon Tingling, Silken Skin, Sweet Beautiful Andrea ˜ A Prelude Unto Her Passion Which Shall Surely Birth, Desires Touch In Flames ˜ Smile, Funny How One Tiny Butterfly Kiss Can Ignite Her Forest And Whom Can Save Such Beauty From Yes, A Lash In Love ? You, Are An Amazing Poetess *:* Set For Faves (* MERRY CHRISTMAS ˜ Love John

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 4:30:00 PM
    Unabashedly romantic! Wonderful cadence and fine abab rhyming. You are one talented lady... Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:45:00 PM
    What an adorable poem! It's very sweet and fun to read. Thanks for the share.

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:05:00 AM
    it's a beautiful butterfly poem <3 <3 love*SKAT

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 11:43:00 PM
    Congratulations my friend..' great winning placement from you, Joe..'

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Andrea I do remember reading this one before, and knew it had to place it's a winner. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:34:00 PM
    congrats on your win Andre super duper nice xxx

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    Date: 6/26/2013 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oops meant Andrea xxx
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 5:01:00 PM
    congrats on this win ;}

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 9:03:00 AM
    congratulations on your win . very romantic. great.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:53:00 PM
    Andrea,, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "buttefly kiss" contest by Gail. Take Care... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Very romantic and congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:23:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Wow ! such a romantic poem. very powerful to soften and capture a heart that is waiting for love to breath

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:13:00 AM
    OH DEAR OH DEAR OH DEAR OH DEAR!!!!! ANDREA!!!!! SUPERB!!!! Ok...ok...I must calm down! Seriously though....this was just a flight of fancy! AWESOME! :) What an awesome take. :) Hugs!

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:22:00 PM
    Exceptional!!! Beautifully written with a softly flowing cadence and super rhyming,,, enjambment in abundance too. Butterfly kisses and butterflies in my stomach? I can still remember..... Good luck in the contest, although I'm sure you won't need it, 'cos this is a sure fire winner!!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:47:00 PM
    Enjoyed this original one from you Andrea, I hope it gets a high placement..'

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:45:00 AM
    what a romantic write, my friend - a big winner here

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 6:57:00 AM
    WoW! Fav!!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:40:00 AM
    I meant to ask you...have you had any problems entering contests? There are several I want to enter right now(including yours) but I can't. I just get a blank screen when I click on 'enter contest'. Can't scroll down or nothin'.

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