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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 3:31:00 PM
    clever- first poem I found on this site. Love Betty

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:09:00 AM
    You know what - you are right. Time is Living in death. I want to believe that Life is just a dream, sometimes a nightmare and we wake up when we die in a wonderous place. Isn't that nice?..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 1:02:00 PM
    I admire this aggressive assessment of flesh and Gods Scribe - ingenius word play - where sleep lingers dreams escape! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:47:00 PM
    Great work Scribe! Very thought provoking. The last line of all the stanzas greatly moved me. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:23:00 AM
    ha ha, Scribe, clever and it takes from us. SKAT

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:20:00 AM
    Good morning Scribe, stopping by to wish you a happy Father's Day.... love..linda

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 6:13:00 AM
    Darn....that's just cool, no doubt about it.

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Everytime I want to post something new I end up not wanting to after reading your work. It's always thought provoking. Your fan INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:50:00 AM
    hi marlon... good to see you reelng again... you knocked me off my feet with this cool, rockinn' piece... superbly done!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Marlon, glad you're back with a new poem and a very thought provoking one!!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Can death be measured in time,wow marlon you have got me thinking here. good poem like this

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 11:03:00 AM
    - A clever poem, Marlon my friend !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 6/10/2013 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Soup Angel!
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 10:00:00 AM
    HA! YES! And we praise them for it. Oh, the irony. Fantastic lines!

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    Date: 6/10/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Right on the money poet... Thanks for the visit!
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Hey there Scribe ;) love this. But then again, you need I would! Hope you are having a good weekend

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    Date: 6/10/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Wilma, you're appreciated!
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:53:00 PM
    WOW

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    Date: 6/10/2013 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Lady!
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:14:00 PM
    time is living in death... that line says so much, an interesting and good write, enjoyed reading it ~always, Linda

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    Date: 6/9/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda!
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 5:50:00 PM
    mortality is the doormat to living..I can see the Welcome sign and Im sure He opens the door :)

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    Date: 6/9/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    He better : )... Thanks for the visit!
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Mind twister!!!!!! Love it.....

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    Date: 6/9/2013 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna!
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 2:56:00 PM
    this is very interesting one. It kind of eludes me but I think I get it.

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    Date: 6/9/2013 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks poet!