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HER

“H” represents the humility she 
displayed from the moment she 
opened her eyes; 
“E” would suggest a revision of 
evolution, 
Because it would take many stories and 
infinite lifetimes to explain the beauty 
of her essence; 
And “R” would ask for a human replica 
of her, 
For many men should admire such as I 
do. 


Modern Shakespeare’s should pay
close attention, 
For her personality writes poetry 
itself, 
And yet the pen remains in my 
hand, 
To describe beauty in third person. 


My cold and nonchalant heart has never 
asked for another summer to warm up too, 
Unless purposeful reasons for an appeal of the 
heart were discovered, 
And yes! 
These reasons always spelt out 
her name. 


As in life which contains both success 
and failure, 
I’ll risk it all, in hope’s for mutual 
affection; 
I’d serenade time if it meant I could 
spend more in her serenity; 
Forget the ridicule and episodes of embarrassment, 
The only thing on television tonight is the 
heartfelt expression of a peacock, 
Waiting to display his romantic feathers to the 
archetype woman; 
Today and forever; 
I’ll dedicate to her. 

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 9:57:00 PM
    very nicely done Jiril ;)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 5/20/2014 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 2/26/2014 10:38:00 AM
    This is beautiful I would be thrilled to be the girl that this poem was written for, and I know your girlfriend or that special girl in your life must be delighted to be with you. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 2/26/2014 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mariam. Appreciate the love.
    Traore Avatar Mariam Traore
    Date: 2/26/2014 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THAT'S HOW U KNOW I LOVE IT I READ IT AGAIN FOR THE 2ND TIME
  1. Date: 2/20/2014 2:01:00 PM
    This is Uhhh well i will get back to you on that because this poem took my words always. From the moment i started reading it i couldn't take my eyes of of it. i really enjoyed this poem.You have a way with words. and the ability to touch people heart just by speaking what is on your. May god bless you and you have a wonderful day.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 2/20/2014 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks April. Appreciate the love. Read some of my newer ones. Peace
  1. Date: 2/1/2014 7:40:00 PM
    WOW!!!!!!!

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 2/1/2014 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Cathy.
  1. Date: 1/30/2014 12:27:00 PM
    This is just beautiful I love it.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 1/30/2014 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mariam. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 1/22/2014 6:46:00 PM
    Jiril you've articulated beauty in a way that can be felt and yearned for; lovely.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 1/22/2014 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks F.J. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Oh my what a perfectly lovely write my friend! So glad you invited me to stop by to read your wonderful writing!

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 12/17/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mary Jo. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Wow, this is crazy good. I cant even point out a favorite line, or stanza cuz it all fits together so well. Please keep up writing, and post some more on here, Im favoriting now!!

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 12/14/2013 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Gina.
  1. Date: 12/10/2013 3:26:00 PM
    Very nice writing.. definition of feminity. True love comes from within and no inhibitions. Super Like.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 12/10/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Cecilia. Appreciate it.
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Dam your good, as an old friend would say, hugs xxx

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 11/19/2013 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mystic Rose
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:42:00 AM
    This is deep and really good. I love reading poems like this and I you are such a great poem artist(poet).

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 10/16/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, Briana. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Your Muse is proud no doubt Jiril - this composition is a masterful display of temperance, passion, melancholoy, and Divine purpose - a mature flow,a tight from begining to ever begining my friend - bravo on your confidence and proper recognition of true inspiration - J.A.B. %

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 10/5/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Justin. Appreciate the love
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 10:00:00 AM
    Good write-up.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 9/7/2013 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Alozor. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/10/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Lovely and very lucky. 'The pen still remain in hands'. She must be very lucky and beautiful. Kudos. Gl

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/10/2013 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:24:00 AM
    hey Jiril ! thanks for your generous remarks on my poem! and any girl would be humbled to be so beautifully described . YOUR WORDS are PERFECT !! greetings alpana

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/6/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Alpana. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 8:11:00 AM
    i just love your poem.very beautifully written and well presented the power of HER :) .

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/5/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kenisha. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:55:00 PM
    You have described the power of a woman very pervasively with this entry.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/4/2013 9:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Robert. They are truly powerful. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 6:17:00 PM
    excellent write it has everything good flow deep and full of feelings Shadow x smiles

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/3/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry I mean Thanks. Shadow Hamilton. Appreciate the love.
    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/3/2013 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Skyler. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 6:13:00 PM
    I really enjoyed how you described "her" nice intro the the poem :)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/3/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Skyler. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:03:00 PM
    Jiril.....any woman would be utterly poweless over the spell you have woven with your beautiful words here. Just beautiful....love Roobs :-)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/3/2013 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol Thanks Ruby. Appreciate the love.
    Honeytip Avatar Ruby Honeytip
    Date: 7/3/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *powerless
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