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An Observation

To put good friends ahead of you means not just being kind. It also means you're not so prone to get stabbed from behind! For the Any NEW rhyming couplet - only 1 Poetry Contest of Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 6/28/2013 10:42:00 PM

    A good poem Miss Andrea, , I posted a Dodoitsu poem. I am not familiar with the form. however I followed the syllable counts and rule. I am hoping you can view my poem and tell me what you think on it...... LUV~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 11:06:00 AM

    This is a wise comment. I have been stabbed in the back before. Good one. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 7:08:00 PM

    wise and wonderful! congrats on your win! (love the title, too...)

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 8:23:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea on your win. One can actually think of your Couplet in various contexts.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 10:52:00 PM

    Andrea, great couplet and deserved win. randy

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 9:40:00 PM

    So glad to see you won a spot with this beaut! Congratulations

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 5:32:00 PM

    nice win......skat

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:46:00 AM

    lol, hope this took the first place spot - love it

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 3:48:00 PM

    Very intriguing piece ,Andrea..Congrats on your well deserved win..

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 7:21:00 AM

    I knew this would be up there on the winners list! Congrats :)

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 4:20:00 AM

    Great placing, loved it. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 10:30:00 PM

    I love the break in the rhythm in the second part...perfect place for it on the word, stabbed. Congratulations, a winner in my book too.

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:13:00 PM

    Congratulations, Andrea! Unfortunately this can be so true!

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:32:00 PM

    I knew this would do well, great job Andrea.

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:57:00 PM

    Good congrats again. BG

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:02:00 PM

    Wisdom, never so well expressed. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 1:44:00 PM

    congrats on your win Andrea...

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 11:02:00 AM

    VERY clever observation, Andrea!...Congrats on the win and thanks for the laugh - Tim

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 10:53:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Hmmm...good observation.Very ice couplet.

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 6/13/2013 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    NICE couplet....
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:56:00 PM

    And if they should turn back around at least you'll see it coming. :/

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:12:00 AM

    I think this one will do well in the contest. Hope you had a nice weekend, Andrea.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:04:00 PM

    Wonderfully true. With true friends you are never afraid to turn your back! Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:18:00 AM

    some words of wisdom Andrea...very nice wishes

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 7:30:00 AM

    One of the excellent truths on friendship and said simply bur very deep rooted. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:25:00 AM

    :))) Wonderful couplet my dearest friend Andrea. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck always. By the way, many big congrats on you many awesome wins recently. Again, hope you have a great weekend/Sunday! God bless! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Oh you are not just a pretty face, but also very clever,,,,,,,

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 2:34:00 PM

    I hope no one ever stabs you in the back cause id stab them in the ars* : ) Very deep message..It hurts if we get stabbed from the back.from those we love the most I guess..I wonder if frirndship is love until it hurts as well..I guess we ve all been there a time or another and yuyk it cuts like a knife.

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:30:00 PM

    Clever, witty, and plus a lot of truth to it! Melikes this one a lot :)