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Day Dreaming Of You

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Day Dreaming Of You

Days spent thinking of you

   Always I can see you

      Your presence I can feel


Dreams while awake

   Reaching out for you

      Each time you slip away

         Abandoned I feel and lost

             Many times I smell you

                 It clusters around me

                     Now settling , and the

                        Good memories flood in


Onwards alone I go

   Free yet never free
 

You are part of me

    Only hidden by the veil

        Until it parts I wait for you

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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:04:00 AM
    This is sure very emotional and lovely write my dear SH. Well done~A.O

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/11/2013 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi AO and ty I do enjoy acrostics pleased you like it Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 7:14:00 PM
    This is a very lovely & sweet poem my dear friend Shadow. I love it and so enjoy reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time reading some of my poems & wonderful comments. Sorry for the late expression of thanks. Have a great weekend! love and big hugs, Leonora

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/9/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Leonora so kind ty I do like acrostic poems you enjoy the W/E too Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 10:44:00 AM
    This is the essence of love: Dreams while awake, Free yet never free. Beautyful

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/8/2013 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Mario ty so much much appreciated Shadow
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Love it Shadow xx

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/8/2013 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so kind of you Mandy ty Shadow
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Welcome to Soup so nice to read your work this evening. Light & Love

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/8/2013 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Debbie for taking time to read x
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 2:53:00 PM
    this is so nice. The allusion to the veil makes me think of something in my religion. Is it significant for you that way?

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/8/2013 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Andrea I am not religious in usual way. I follow mother natures ways. ty for reading. Shadow
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 1:37:00 PM
    Dearest Shadow a beautiful Acrostic!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/7/2013 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dear Demetrious ty for kind comment Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 11:23:00 AM
    Reminds me a little of the hit song of yesteryear by Aretha Franklin. Good write.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/7/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hope that's a good remind lol Robert. ty kindly Shadow
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 7:58:00 AM
    A heart holding onto memories & wants. The need for more is seeping between the lines here. Awesome job!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/7/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty kindly Drake lovely comment Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 6:59:00 AM
    One word...''fANTASTIC''

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/7/2013 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    high praise from you dearest friend I am honoured Shadow xox