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Traces

Bound by your presence
A torture to erase,
You have taken, 
a piece of my existance
That cannot be salvaged.

In this cold winters night
Numbness, crys me to sleep.
Dont wake me from, this slumber
For its my only, peace.

A silent cry, I weep.
A fallen tear, that speaks.
A lonely heart, that mourns
Lingers in my speech.

Im not sober in existence
But transparent, in my flesh.
A abandoned spirit,
Now occupies, my emptiness.

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  1. Date: 10/11/2013 11:07:00 AM
    Oh again i just love your poetry,, this is so sad, yet such strength in it's structure....

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 7:26:00 AM
    Hi john, thanks so much for your kind comment. Truly appreciate it.....cheriexx

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 11:18:00 AM
    WOW!! Powerful writing, yet tinged in softness. I like your style... Congratulations on your win..... Jake

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:40:00 AM
    Good morning, CHERIE congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LINDA

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/6/2013 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou so much linda appreciate, your kindnessxo cherie...
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:59:00 PM
    Cherie. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 7/6/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks skat:)
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:22:00 PM
    Hi CHERIE, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/10/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi skat,,,, thanks so much for your feedback. Will definetly drop in, thanks again. Wow so much to take in on this amazing poetry site lol:0) thanks again looking forward to reading from you:)
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 1:34:00 PM
    Cherie. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

    thomas Avatar cherie thomas
    Date: 6/10/2013 11:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Greetings linda, and thanks so much for the warm welcome...thankyou for all the information, of this site. As I get familiar with all these amazing poems. Will definetly check out your contest. Thanks again,,,, cherie