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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:17:00 PM

    Yasmin, I know I am still here, but I've been commenting on a few of my most favorite poets and people. I saved the best for last. I don't think I will be on after today... LOL, I can't believe I spent all day on your poems alone today... Wow.. I've been here with your poems all morning, for over 7 hours... Ha-ha, Like a soup date... I do hope you enjoy all the comments I left. Meant each extra visit... Take care my lovely friend... I got a few more to go this moment... Linda

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  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:49:00 PM

    this is absolutely wonderful, Yasmin. and I see below that I told you right. She DID love it. Big congrats to you . How are things going?

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 4:34:00 PM

    Lovely and Wonderful piece...Good job...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you,pal...

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:19:00 PM

    LOVE it.. theme and write. Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:09:00 PM

    Yasmin congratulation on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:42:00 AM

    Wonderful poem. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 6:10:00 AM

    lovely love poem great. congrats for the win

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:09:00 PM

    We want to but we can't and the more we do the less ready they are to do for themselves [sigh] what you can do is be there! Be happy, healthy and be there soon there will be grand babies! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Wonderful and touching. Memories that are golden. Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 3:54:00 PM

    Yasmin, this touched me very much. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Yasmin, congratulations on your 2nd place win in Constance's contest. This brought tears to my eyes. The depth of love you so brilliantly described here to your child. Absolutely gorgeous! Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Lovely heart, congrats xxx

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:47:00 PM

    A nice poem to your children. Lovely. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 6:25:00 PM

    oh is this what Constance's contest is about? If so, she is going to love these. I know I DO.

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 3:07:00 PM

    This is very nice Yasmin, i am over protective when it comes to my child or any other child... the tanka's are lovely, and i sure enjoyed them... very touching and pleasing for any maternal mom... mother and so on.... now I am off to grade 2 contest i have on hold... maybe i will go bother 3 other poets before i grade the contest...xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 3:05:00 PM

    Hi Miss Sleepy Head.. i just read your recent comment... now I am seeing you on line.. LOL.. it took me that long to fish the poem i posted minutes ago. hope you like it... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 1:26:00 PM

    you warm my write with this tender, loving gudt, mareey.. your children must be so proud of you; i am.. a lavish feast...:) huggs and take care!..

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 9:45:00 AM

    You have done masterfully for this contest by Constance! I liked your approach and delightful appeal within your write! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What an outstanding piece, quite an amazing poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 7:31:00 AM

    Children are indeed blessings. Nice to read this am.