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SEEN TEARING EYES

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SEEN TEARING EYES

                                              First day in school life
                                           sorrow blue innocent face
                                               one silent next cries

                                                Mom was in tension
                                           sister took care at that time
                                               seen tearing eyes


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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 9:50:00 AM

    Very expressive work about human emotion..Would be a great Senryu also..Enjoyed reading this morn..It is interesting to see the children when they enter school..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Your comments always lift me up..Thanks..Sara

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/13/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot for remembering me. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:59:00 AM

    - Sensitive moment .... well written as always bl. - Have a nice Sunday! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/9/2013 7:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My dear friend, loved always..........,bl
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 7:27:00 PM

    I can imagine the nursery pupils in our school with your very beautiful poem my dear friend bl. The parents can't leave them because they kept on crying. Thank you so much for sharing it. I love your poem and so enjoyed. Thank you also for your warm congratulatory comments. Belated congrats in your latest wins as well & this great write of yours. Have a blessed wkend! love and hugs, Leonora

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/9/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My dear friend, loved always..........,bl
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 3:40:00 PM

    i did cry when i first went to school, but was fine the day after... splendid, bl...:) huggs

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/9/2013 3:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My dear friend, loved always..........,bl
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:12:00 AM

    been there and done that bl really can relate,,, wonderful poetry

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/7/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks........................ my friend, loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/6/2013 7:05:00 AM

    funny but really cool. i enjoy to read this. have a great day...Elai

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/6/2013 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for visiting my page and for your comment. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 6/6/2013 2:22:00 AM

    nicely done dearest poet bro Devnath <3 :) wish you a great day :)

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/6/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot of thanks calling me brother and for your nice comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 5:08:00 PM

    it's true, when the parent hurts.. their children hurt with them, enjoyed your write,.. ~always, Linda

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/5/2013 8:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot always my friend, bl