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BLACKPOOL

Blackpool
As dark as your depth
So is the length of pleasure I feel
Still stuck in the midst
Here is never ending pleasure

Many are stunned by your view
How else could I describe your look?
Like a swill quenches my thirst
So is your tasty sip

The entrance through your gates give you joy
Your glossy painted walls aid my graceful entry
You indeed are my graceful delight
What else do I need for the feel?

It’s needless to know the innermost places of you
No matter how deep I probe
I can only keep wishing I knew
Still nothing new

I can swim all day long
No day is long in you
No whim can reach you
My blackpool


THE INVINCIBLE PEN

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:49:00 PM

    Invisible, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    Pen Avatar Invincible Pen Date: 6/11/2013 2:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    friendship is the best thing that has happened to humanity.. unfortunately only a few find it; I am glad you have stretched its arm to me.. A gesture far from my forgetfulness. God bless, myfriend
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:07:00 PM

    I will agree with Edward. Would love for you to read Revitalized Love in the Fall of Winter. Welcome to Poetry Soup my friend.

    Pen Avatar Invincible Pen Date: 6/11/2013 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hello my friend, many thanks for your kind words.... I am inspired
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 3:25:00 PM

    Well written piece here! Welcome to the soup! You are a good writter. - edward

    Pen Avatar Invincible Pen Date: 6/10/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks Ed, a thought well received...
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:03:00 AM

    I like your poet name, Invincible Pen. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

    Pen Avatar Invincible Pen Date: 6/10/2013 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cheers, Linda
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 3:09:00 AM

    I.P. a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Pen Avatar Invincible Pen Date: 6/10/2013 3:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    cheers, Anne