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Exciting unexpectedly

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Exciting unexpectedly

It is exciting
The snow falling in August
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
To meet love at the market
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
To have money in account
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
Find syllables for HaiKu
Unexpectedly.


This new version to conform the syllable rules of HaiKu

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  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:17:00 AM

    Fantastic and very clever.

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/16/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello. Debbie. You are enchanted to life and gentle with me
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:52:00 PM

    Great poem. Love the ending

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/10/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Monterey. Your comment is particularly welcome because you have lived much with children as me and we think in similar ways
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:20:00 PM

    I loved the clever twist in the end... I get excited myself when haiku pop up in my head out of nowhere. Though I like to break the syllable rules, personally... turning into more of a freestyle form of poetry. Nicely done and quite inventive!

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/10/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I already replied about the syllable rule of HaiKu. I think I will turn to free verses instead of chosing the Haiku form, until I do not understand the correct meaning of HaiKu. Thank you for commenting. Be free to criticize when needed
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 2:42:00 PM

    very COOL way to HaiKU

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/10/2013 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Andrea, for commenting. About HaiKu, I have many doubts about the meaning and the rules to compose it correctly.
  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Money in the account, I concur!!! This was a very charming set of Haikus!

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/6/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very kind of you, I am honoured
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 11:39:00 AM

    Wonderfully done from beginning to end. Last one is more beautiful of haiku. Loved always, bl

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/6/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting and commenting. I only try to write what I think and I learned much from all of you soupers
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 11:06:00 AM

    superb Haiku Mario I love the flow simply exquisite Shadow

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/6/2013 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is a pleasure to hear such compliments from you so kind. I try to be simple when writing, but I love reading on this site excellent poets like you
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:43:00 AM

    ha ha, I wish to open the door to my restaurant and find everything done unexpectedly. LOL, that would get me excited. great haiku.... Linda

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ Date: 6/5/2013 10:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Linda for visiting me. Also this is exciting unaxpectedly. I try to visit as many as possible, to learn and you are one of the best