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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:04:00 AM
    I didn't find it fluffy at all. I was caught up in the story. Very well done Heather. You are most talented.

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 1:27:00 PM
    It was so fun to read this oldie of yours. You were a good writer then too. I like the know...something very different from you. Actually, you are the reason I started posting this kind of stuff when you said I should try a created a monster! We body surfed a lot when I was a kid and I take my kids to the beach about once a year. Funny...we used to pull each other on body boards around the yard behind a three-wheeler...a few scars thanks to that ignorance!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 11:30:00 AM
    How cool to read this! I had "Surfin USA" playing in my head as I read this. Sadly, it will be stuck in my damn head the rest of today! :) This was a very enjoyable piece to read!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 2:32:00 AM
    Heather...This brings back so many memories!...I learned to body surf as a youngster...I just taught my twin great- grandsons how at the beach last week...An awesome ride, and thanks so much for liking my poem for your contest - Tim