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Spring's End, Kimo

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Spring's End, Kimo

Spring bellows plainly throughout the mid-west
Tornado Alley endures 
the voice of EF-4’s. 



6/2/13
for Kimo contest, Debbie Guzzi




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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:45:00 PM

    Good work! congrats on your win. BG

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/12/2013 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Barb, Did I make the connnection between Great Plains (mid-west) and plain talk. I appreciate the applause.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:38:00 PM

    A very active year with tornados. A fabulous Kimo. Congratulations! Connie

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/12/2013 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That it is, Thanks Connie, a kind of a plaint, not a complaint but a sorrowful cry of grief. Never heard a tornado but I've heard they sound somewhat like a train. Appreciate the applause.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:21:00 PM

    And time spent in the underground bunker... Congratulations on the win... Jack

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/12/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Jack appreciate the applause. It has always amazed me that more people are not killed in tornadoes for that simple reason, planning ahead, being ready.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:00:00 PM

    VERY stunning and effective Kimo, Reason...Congratulations...Do I assume correctly that 'EF-4's' refer to the strength of the tornado? - Tim

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/12/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tim, you are indeed correct. Thank you for the comment/applause. I had hoped to make the connection between bellows (apparatus for producing a strong current of air) and the bellowing (loud roar) of the winds of spring.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 4:01:00 PM

    Very modern, current, crisp! Congrad's Light & Love

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/12/2013 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Debbie for the honor of a win, unfortunately the kimo is doubly current. -the wind currents being what they are.
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:36:00 PM

    I am from Iowa and know of the mid west!! Where are you from? I enjoyed your kimo.

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 6/2/2013 7:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    From slightly east of mid-west, Indiana. We had a tornado in March of 2012 about 20 NW of us in Henryville, IN. Destroyed a school and many homes.