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NO SLEEP WHOLE NIGHT GONE

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Below is the poem entitled NO SLEEP WHOLE NIGHT GONE which was written by poet BL devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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NO SLEEP WHOLE NIGHT GONE

                                             It was hot summer 
                                        sweating body bathing like
                                           time was at mid night

                                              I was on my bed
                                   inverter had not been charged
                                             load shed going on

                                          mosquitoes sweet song
                                            sticking on to my flesh
                                         sucking my red liquid blood

                                        one's sent next one came
                                      my tut song by clapping slaps 
                                       no sleep whole night gone

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  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:31:00 PM
    I've sure known nights similar to this one!!

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:00:00 PM
    very descriptive and dleightful in its poetic expression, bl.. well done!..:) huggs

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 6/2/2013 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks my friend for reviewing my write and for giving me sweet comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 1:33:00 PM
    - Night without sleep comes - yes, they are familiar - Well done my friend bl. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 6/2/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your quick comment, loved always, bl