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You and I

Alone to night just you and I
Behind this veil of thick cold mist
Captivating in this enchanted magical night
Dancing in the blessed lovers rhythm
Enveloped in the ultimate pleasure the world beyond
Fervor in ecstasy









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  1. Date: 6/7/2013 11:32:00 PM
    Great piece!!! Well written- Edward

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 2:22:00 AM
    its beautiful Manel :) i hope u are well. *hugs* mwaah

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/6/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i am partly Ok. Just a back ache. I use the lap top these days on my bed. Nothing serious. Old age. ha! ha! Thanks my love Thank for your concern visit. Hugs!
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 4:58:00 PM
    such passion in this one Manel, very much enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/6/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my dearest PD. I like you this way better
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 5:40:00 PM
    NICELY done, Manel.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/3/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear Andrea
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 11:21:00 AM
    That is beautifully expressed, God bless you both. LOve it. a 7>>>> Terry xo

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/3/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Therese.
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 7:52:00 AM
    You are a true romantic! Well done.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/3/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Richard
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 4:36:00 AM
    - Hey my friend Manel. - This is beautiful!! - It will come high up on the winning list - Good luck! - Have a beautiful day - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/3/2013 4:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my deaerest Anne.
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 4:07:00 AM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..Sara

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/3/2013 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, my dearest Sara
  1. Date: 6/3/2013 12:58:00 AM
    Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/3/2013 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend.
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 4:17:00 PM
    That is pure magic of a romantic verse!

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 6/2/2013 11:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend Demetrios.