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UNREAL WORLD

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Below is the poem entitled UNREAL WORLD which was written by poet Rubie Piquero. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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UNREAL WORLD

those clouds are high
like my mind, it's getting higher
I see different figures
but it is faraway from what I thought

I do believe at it, at first
but when I woke up, everything is cluttered
Going back to reality, I wasn't happy at all

So I still do some of the stuff
getting drunk and do some puff
putting myself to the happiest world
to the world, I mean the unreal world

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  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:53:00 PM
    Maliban sa pag share ng poems anu pa ang gamit ng PoetrySoup sau? saken eh paghanap ng gf. hahahahah joke. pampallipas oras lg kase dameng blocked sites d2 sa call center. e2 nlg naisip ko na site

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 6/4/2013 3:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "siguro ara sa poetry lang talga", "ARA". Bisaya ka po ate? taga Iloilo po kase ako. Kakaboring rin kase mnsan tong soup eh. hahah
    Piquero Avatar Rubie Piquero
    Date: 6/4/2013 2:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    di ko naman pa mashadong na-explore tong PoetrySoup e. Siguro ara sa Poetry lang talaga, tamang post at basa lang.
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 10:18:00 PM
    Lets get high/drunk! Shy type ata si ate Ruby. Di nag rereply sa mga comments

    Piquero Avatar Rubie Piquero
    Date: 6/3/2013 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ayan, mag-rereply na ako dahil tagalog LOL :)
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 6:15:00 AM
    Nice poem.

    Piquero Avatar Rubie Piquero
    Date: 6/3/2013 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Sir...