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Timing

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Below is the poem entitled Timing which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Timing

A red rising sun like a fireball on the horizon
Ushers in a warm humid day
Slowly it inches its way up, changes colors 
Welcomes all to come play

The roosters excited voices toll out their cock-a-doodle-do
While cooing Doves welcome the sun highlighting sky's blue

One lone crow caws out atop a Georgia Pine
As the sun changes to clear illumination
Right aligned with the Master's time 

Has my timing met the Master's 
Did my clock strike-out on its own
Yes, it did at times leaving Him all alone
He waited with arms wide open
Welcomed me back into the fold
An erring child welcomed 
That He dressed in the finest purple robe

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  1. Date: 6/9/2013 11:13:00 AM
    wow.. amazing and inspiring... love..Linda

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 10:23:00 AM
    so inspiring Sara, so visual...

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 1:03:00 PM
    Wonderful exclamation. Nicely adorned a beautiful theme. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 11:08:00 AM
    This uplifted me so high! I really enjoyed this! Excellent job, as usual.

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 12:25:00 AM
    A marvelous verse!

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Sara, I am awed by your creativity. I know from whence it comes. All who consider themselves prodigals should take comfort in these words. Written with a consecrated pen.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:17:00 PM
    wow, one of your best ones. I love how you put the message with the aspects of nature around you. WEll done!

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Impressive poem. Your poems' endings are astounding. Congratulations for a beautiful Georgia result. G.

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 6:46:00 AM
    - A masterpiece Sara, very well written! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 6:02:00 AM
    This is thus a beautiful write my friend! You have brought together a masterful poem full of life and wonderment Sara! I just loved reading this enlightening piece this morning! What tremendous piece, a grand poem you have written, Great work!!

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:24:00 AM
    Oh Sara....this is simply beautiful. Yes...He does welcome us back into the fold. I love how you brought nature and the Creature and Time into this piece. Be blessed. :) Echoes of the prodigal son coming home!!!