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BABY

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BABY

written 28th oct 2012

You were never seen by us, that privilege sadly was not for us 
  an extravagance we were overwhelmed by, the thought of your embrace  
The entire twelve weeks you were a joy to have known, even 'without' being seen 
 hearing about you're arrival, was a blessing at the time you were conceived
For life hadn't been easy and we had all asked God, we even plea'd 

We wait upon the day, you will finally meet us 
 having the honour to love and learn with you, saddly not for us
It brakes my heart as you part, you had already embeded love into my heart
 Just knowing we will now...forever be kept apart

God has other plans for your love that's so strong, blessing us from the start
 we continually pray, maybe he'll deside to let you stay around
But the intense pain of tears and loss, are constantly falling all around
 just let it be known, we all desperately wanted you to become part of us
 
We all will love you for eternity, you are now forever one of us,
 although it was only for a very slight second, it was better than never
You are from this day on, embedded into our hearts forever...
   the impact you have left 'unborn young one'' my beloved grandchild....
                                  "Angel" 2012

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  1. Date: 9/20/2014 5:56:00 AM
    such a special soul, sometimes god takes the ones he knows are to sensitive for this world, he wants those special ones to be pure and not see this world with it's evil, and keeps them with and beside him,

  1. Date: 9/15/2014 5:22:00 AM
    that is very beautiful, I could feel every word, and you wrote it out so nice, I just flowed down the page,

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:16:00 PM
    Denise, congrats......... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:50:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Denise

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:49:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Denise

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 7:47:00 PM
    Hi Denise, This appeared to be your first poem and I am impressed, this poem has warmth and it is tragic losing a baby without being able to show your feelings, this is very good I rated you a 6 to allow you to improve with time as no one should be rated the top mark until they have become a master poet, no reflection on your abilities. John

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Denis, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 3:08:00 AM
    Hi Denise, I come from Australia too, that is a really tragic poem about a little baby who is now with God, I commend you on this wonderful poem. it is such an unfortunate experience when you lose a loved one at birth. all the best to you. John

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Hi Denise. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda"

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Impressive write! Welcome to the soup! Keep writing! Kim

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 11:49:00 AM
    Denise, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:43:00 AM
    Very heartfelt. Please continue to post your work, it helps to cope I find. Welcome. Rick

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:42:00 AM
    Nice heart rendering read, I deeply felt your sadness, thank you very much, for the read