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THE CLOUDS AND THE SUN

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THE CLOUDS AND THE SUN

THE CLOUDS AND THE SUN 


The day arrived on her galloping horse of color gray
The sun hidden behind the clouds wanted to play

They let him from time to time through to have a peep
But never allowed him their fluffy mass ever to reap 

Suddenly the angered storm pulled down the blind
Reminding the sun that time has come for good to hide

Then came the thunder and was followed by the rain
Dissipated the clouds, left the sun to shine again!  
 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    02 JUNE 2013


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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:08:00 AM
    a definite 7 Demetrios so breathtakingly beautiful love it one for favs Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:43:00 AM
    Yes, I just LOVE this incredible write my friend! This is a wondrous and awe inspiring poem Demetrios! I am in complete bewilderment by the grandiose sight of the sun and the clouds! I just love the meaning behind your delightful poem! You have written a harmonious piece here this morning! What an amazing poem, Great Work!!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 6/2/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my dear friend, Russell. Your visit always a joy. Thank you for your bighearted comment!
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 12:54:00 AM
    I really liked this piece. so short, and so affective, well done Demtrious

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 6/2/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter! Once I was writing longer poems for I was younger. Now I write short for fear I might not have time to...finish them! Ha-ha! I appreciate your fine comment!
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 12:46:00 AM
    Delightfully beautiful....

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 6/2/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Eileen, Than you from the bottom of my heart for your visit and your cordial comment!