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MOVES LIKE A HELICOPTER

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MOVES LIKE A HELICOPTER

                                                flapping grasshopper
                                               moves like a helicopter
                                                quickly up and down 

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  1. Date: 6/15/2013 9:28:00 PM

    Clever write! I like how you put these haikus and senryu together. Edward

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/16/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for you nice comment on my write. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 8:13:00 PM

    Reading this reminded me of my late uncle who worked for Boeing as a helicopter mechanic. Good write for few words.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/2/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks my friend for your visit and comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:27:00 PM

    amazing imagery bl

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/1/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:06:00 PM

    :) I don't like insects, but you made this cute! Thanks for your visit.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/1/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:59:00 PM

    a cute comparison, BL. And I am glad you liked my poem to India.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/1/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wordless but with word's sound, give you thanks a lot. Loved always, bl