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Below is the poem entitled EVIL SAVIOUR which was written by poet PARIVARTANA SINGH. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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since that day when i was alone.. 
i was sitting in a broken chair.. 
looking at a tree trashed by fire blown.. 
wondering whether you were a hero or evil 

i tried a lot to extinguish that fire.. 
i tried a lot to compensate with an 
again your angel vibes comes thru d 
woods allure.. 
tym hs nt taught me to neglect your evil 

i pushed myself back as i always do.. 
i pushed you away by negotiating ds 
its a battle btw mind , heart n also my 
soul sue.. 
evil saviour z nw turning into hero 

my heart n mind merge at an end point.. 
its a clear vision of having him with open 
after all it's an end of that fight in my 
mind sight... 
evil saviour has become my heart saviour 
it storms.. 

love pari

if u liked d poem or evn if u hate it..plz gv 
me ur feedback through ur cmnts..i wl 
apreciate it..

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  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:38:00 PM

    great one liked a lot

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH Date: 10/21/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thnx vishal...:) :)
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 11:41:00 AM

    I like the way you open yourself up in your poems.............. A girl who seems deeply in love.Beautiful piece keep writing Lots of love -Shiraz

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH Date: 6/25/2013 11:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thnx shiraz...i apreciate ur wrds..thnx a lot :) :)
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:01:00 PM

    Parivartana , a deep approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH Date: 6/11/2013 12:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thnx skat...i appreciate dt u hv likd d poem..u cn go thru odrs too..n wht cn i say about frm india...n doin b.arch...hope u wl lyk my odrs poem too....
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 6:12:00 AM


  1. Date: 6/7/2013 6:12:00 AM

    Nice Poetry !

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:07:00 PM

    Parivartana. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH Date: 6/4/2013 11:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey hi linda...i have entrd into ur contst..thnx for ur feedbck....u cn chck out my odr poems also if u wnt..:) :)