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haiku 6

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haiku 6

waves of giggles

and the scent of coconut – 

city splash pad

*where we spent today. I was actually shocked to smell coconut, because most children's sunblock doesn't have any. But there were some moms sunning, so.... still, I actually froze in midstep, inhaled and smiled... BLISS!

Another verbless... I'm liking exploring the concept of verbless.... I do INTENTIONALLY use words that COULD be a verb if I rewrote lines, 

Life. Busy. Tiring. GOOD! 

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  1. Date: 5/31/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Very nice haiku Cyndi - Tim

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 5:31:00 PM
    very cleverly written Shadow