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Cliff

Marissa Faries Avatar Marissa Faries - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Cliff

Near the end of the edge, truth is there is no end,
But only a different story into which I descend.
A drop so high, seemingly endless,
But I am near the edge of my life’s end.
Falling alongside the wall of time,
Truth is there is no wall, but only a cliff to grip 
As my soul slips into death as I breathe my last breath.

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  1. Date: 5/31/2013 9:15:00 AM

    This was a good capture of such a harrowing moment of decisiveness. But, like any good story, there's a beginning and an end. Make the leap into better tomorrows, today. Well done.

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 2:57:00 AM

    Incomplete and unclear.

    Faries Avatar Marissa Faries Date: 6/1/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Exactly how one's life is, after having jumped. This person falling from a cliff, has left his life incomplete. His fate is unclear, but it is clear he is falling towards his death here.