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Broken

Broken- Reprint Luther's I who have nothing!

I who is broken
I who have spoken too soon
As I now have noone
It's now a year in June
I have been lost deserted
A drift in a sea of my own emotions
I'm intermittently frenzied to frozen
Numb to the reality of my shattered heart
This was a clean break,No soft tissue fracture
Who will help me pick up the pieces
That is going to be the hardest part

I who've been knowing
I who can't tell if he's coming or going
They look at you with sorrow in their eyes
More like that poor poor man
They can see the sadness inside
They can read as my pen just cries
I couldn't pretend anymore 
No amount of sedative can conceal these lies
Now that the world knows, and can have a good laugh at me
I lay broken on this tiny apartment floor, disgusted at what I see

I without a home
I have a roomate but he lives alone
I'm conspicuous to the eyes as her absence is my alibi
I who have regretfully
I who contextually- have replayed our final hours in the
Can't go back time machine that haunts me in my mind
This kind of torture is what blurries the line
Between the living and the dead
This is too much pain and suffering for mankind 

I who if I saw you tomorrow
Would have so much to say
I who wondered what I could have done 
to make you stay
I who on my knees do pray
for your successful recovery
Run from all your demons and if any of them are me
Or your ability to love completely
Heal your mind free your body
I hope this time away gives you the perspective 
Peace and serenity.
I have nothing more but my deepest apology
I lay broken in my own apathy.

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  1. Date: 8/4/2013 9:49:00 AM

    great write. I like 90 percent of this and the other ten percent isn't bad either.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:20:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetrysoup Kian. May you enjoy the site for years to come. Everyone here will help you along the way if they can or they will find someone who is capable. Love, Carol