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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 1:40:00 PM
    A very good piece here Yasmin I congratulate you in the great placement you have achieved Joe..)

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Yasmin, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Heather’s contest, those situations are always difficult.

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:40:00 AM
    Yasmin, ... congratulations with your winning poem... in Heather's contest... Linda

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Thank you for liking my poem Yasmin... that was from out of the blue.. by the way, this is a nice poem,,, sad, and deep. I haven't seen Heather's contest.. However, wishing you the best... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 2:31:00 AM
    amazing write dear beloved Yasmin <3 you got your tallent and i got my best time enjoyed your brilliant <3

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 12:15:00 AM
    - Good morning my dear friend, Yasmin! - Have a beautiful day - oxox / / AnneLise :)

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 2:43:00 PM
    wonderfully descriptive! you've captured the feeling in that car perfectly. congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:24:00 PM
    A moving, brutally honest write. You wove a powerful poem with a measly ten lines! Great job - Big congrats on your win in my contest!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Yes..........this deserves a top place!!! Congratulations to you, Yasmin!!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 6:36:00 AM
    - Well done Yasmin, a unique poem for this contest - it will win (I think)! - Have a beautiful and enjoyable week, my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 4:11:00 AM
    Such a wonderful write of poverty and city life. Talented in imagery produced. Rick

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:21:00 AM
    Think of nursery rhymes

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 5:30:00 PM
    WOW.. you are a poetic sensation with the descriptions. Setting the scene of the poverty we encounter just driving thorough our cities so well.

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 9:39:00 AM
    Not hard to see when you see it on TV . It's a different world but I know it's there . From slum lord millionaire .

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    Date: 5/31/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wanna be eunuchs
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    Eunuchs. We have wierdos to .
  1. Date: 5/31/2013 4:16:00 AM
    Udhar baarish ho raha hai kya Yasmin?Idhaar tin din se depression chal raha hai.Charo taraf paani hi paani......

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  1. Date: 5/31/2013 4:14:00 AM
    A touching write here Yasmin.Enjoyed this Dizain.

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Oh my.......this touches the heart in the deepest way. I have felt this way too often in my own community at times, when passing those who have feels almost ashamed for what we have and take for granted.

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 3:06:00 PM
    This is heart wrenching to say the least, you have done an excellent job in expressing the helplessness that you feel upon seeing their suffering, well done my Princess, bless your sweet heart, xxx

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 2:53:00 PM
    This is a phenomenal write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a dynamic piece, Great Work!!