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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:01:00 AM
    Wot's the actual term called when the end of a stanza bleeds into the next one? You incorporate it here several times(stanzas/non-rhyming couplets, wotever), with enjambment. It has a good effect in this poem....I am becoming more and more a fan of this technique(wotever it is called). I have been practicing it since last year(again, mainly not publicly posted, is all). Actually, I use the technique about 6 or 7 times in the poem that I am currently working on(a big rambler of a piece).

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 11:52:00 PM
    Ok, before I leave a comment about the poetry itself, I have to admit that I am shocked this man already has supervised day passes after four years. There shouldn't EVER be any type of release for him, supervised or not. Who is going to be held accountable if Vince Weiguang Li is released into public?! I am a firm believer that there are certain lines that when crossed, there is no true rehabilitation. This is an example of one of those lines. So is pedophelia.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:23:00 PM
    Man I can't read any more of this, I wouldn't even want to take a tranquiller!! A lot of great writing here but way to much focus on 'things' which GROW when focused upon [It's a great verse as always I like how you broke the lines but its all too real for me] Congrad's on your win Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 6/10/2013 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    line 1 by this..I mean verses on this topic Sis not YOUR verse in particular
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:13:00 PM
    What a horror this is.......even more so, knowing it really took about giving someone a nightmare!.....this is too terrible to contemplate......but what an amazing job you did telling this story! You are such a gifted writer.....even the darkest tale becomes amazing.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:10:00 PM
    congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 8:14:00 AM
    Another amazing write Cyndi!

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 10:14:00 AM
    This's masterpiece Cyndi! A very thoughtful write wove under a grief atmosphere. Thanks for sharing. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 8:58:00 AM
    I feel the purge of your soul here Cyndi....well penned can only pray for justice....or hope the lad had brothers who seek bring light....jimbo

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 1:47:00 AM
    Cyndi its a must read, i hope the law is passed immediately. .....Seren

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 10:01:00 PM
    Modern day Cannibals My God why do you do this to us?