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Two Pisces

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Below is the poem entitled Two Pisces which was written by poet Ken Carroll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Two Pisces

I walk the sea
the sea walks me
along dancing waves

of green salinity
caressing my feet...

Towards the west
the sun sinks
off to New Orleans,

orange and red hues
paint my senses...

In New Orleans
beer drenched misty bars
host jazz musicians

playing a purple and yellow
Mardi Gras toot...

Back in Biloxi
the sea is breathing
rising and falling...

The moon is sighing
to a love lorn sea...

In my pocket
a picture of a girl
building sand castles...

Sister of the sea
pisces by birth...

the stars shine on my city
soon sky will open
sea green turning to sea blue...

None matches the beauty
I see gazing at you...


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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:46:00 PM

    Ken This is a charming and peaceful write. The imagery pulled me in and took me on a ride of harmony and serenity I had to read this cause I am a fishie sign. LOL Thanks for the nice comment on my Poets Masterpiece poem.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 11/11/2013 10:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Robin, Thank you my fellow pisces! Ken
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Hi Ken, Well, as soon as i saw a mention of the sea i had to be in here. It always draws me in. Wonderful as always Ken. I read it a few times and it seems to gently roll, just like the waters i see at the beginning. It still rolls on then to the end. Once again it has the flow of a musical piece the way it is crafted. From start to finish i followed your vision and thoroughly enjoyed it. A brilliant write and read Ken. Catch you later. Your friend, MIKE.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 9/5/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Mike, Thanks for dropping by and reading this one..The sea is my favorite place to relax I guess I am a true pisces male... Your friend, Ken
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:23:00 PM

    The title of this poem just caught my eye, because I am a Pisces, as well.... This is a very beautiful and touching piece, Ken. I really enjoyed it!.....Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, "Lonely Soul". It means a lot!

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 9/1/2013 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HI Kelly, Thanks for stopping by and leaving kind feedback.. Ken
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:20:00 AM

    Your an excellent writer with a great control of words, and the result is a well written piece of poetry, with a touch of class, have a great day dear writer, your penmanship is impeccable, hugs xxx

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 5/29/2013 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mystic for stopping by and reading...Ken