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BURSTS AFTER LIMIT

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Below is the poem entitled BURSTS AFTER LIMIT which was written by poet BL devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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BURSTS AFTER LIMIT

                                                    feeling by giving
                                            not same by taking indeed
                                                 needs indicate there

                                                  one side's sacrifice
                                              good with in fit tolerance
                                                    bursts after limit

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:13:00 AM
    well expressed, bl... we can only tolerate things at a certain point... a most honest rant.. grreat job!..:) huggs

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 5/30/2013 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    For your comment, I am inspired. Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:29:00 AM
    a very fitting title this one has!

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 5/29/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks my friend for visiting to my write and for your comment. Loved always, bl