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Incomplete Day

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Incomplete Day

My days not complete,
never kissed my sweet good night.
I can't sleep without.

2nd version

I can't sleep tonight,
never kissed my sweet good night.
My days not complete.

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 4:22:00 AM
    I feel this way too!

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 12:44:00 PM
    short sweet nice :)

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth
    Date: 5/30/2013 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 3:40:00 AM
    - Touching and sweet haiku, Adam. - Well done! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hapworth Avatar Adam Hapworth
    Date: 5/29/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne-Lise :)