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Dreams or Reality

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Dreams or Reality

The warm tingle down my spine, tell tale signs of a slight tan.
Freckles burst forth as flowers do, is it a dream or is this how I am?

Rolling down the grassy knoll, paddling in the stream.
Daisy chains loop round and round, or is this all a dream?

Running jumping like the deer, nuzzling softly on your chest.
Will I wake and find in fear, Tis not you, but just a dream at best?

To separate dreams from reality, this is hard to do.
Because my reality is a dream, when I am with you.

© 27 /05 /2013 

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 11:23:00 AM
    My reality is a dream when I'm with you. Beautiful irony. Bravo! Raplh Sergi

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 12:14:00 PM
    This is such a beauty........what a warm and endearing poem, Mandy. I think this is one of your best! Loved it!

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:44:00 PM
    The last line is very nice to feel. Thanks....,loved always,bl

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:37:00 PM
    Sweetness in simplicity Mandy - to think that everyday life was once like this pretty write for most people on this planet,; then economic 'progress' intruded - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:44:00 PM
    awww, lovely, Mandy. congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:23:00 PM
    a sweet one, Mandy. A bit like how I did mine!

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 12:48:00 PM
    Beautiful last line,Mandy We all hope to be 'Living the dream.' Good luck in the contest, my dear. SuZ

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 5:30:00 AM
    lovely...

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 5:21:00 AM
    Hi Mandy good luck in contest this should do well fine write Shadow

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Ooooo I love the,' is this how I am', I think maybe we are all a little this. Great write Mandy, good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:12:00 PM
    So smooth Mandy, it reads like a dream, but in reality it was written by a very talented woman, whom I adore, xxx

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:02:00 AM
    This was a sweet poem. I like the last two lines best. Ciao, Jancarl

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 12:29:00 PM
    awwh, this delicate one makes me drool, mandy.. good thing, the contest ended before i could post mine as this surely will hit the top!... welll done..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 10:45:00 AM
    you are back to your very best with this, Mandy,,, just love it,,

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Sweet, I enjoyed your dream. BG

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:27:00 AM
    I love this kind of dream. In this case it would be wonderful if it were reality. Nicely done Mandy, I enjoyed the image conveyed. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:39:00 AM
    Awww Mandy! :) Sweet!!! :) Glad you're happy!