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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:21:00 PM
    Wonderful, poem... Very refreshing... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:42:00 PM
    Yasmin, congratulations on a well deserve win. You put natural things in place so eloquently.... Jake

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:06:00 PM
    this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:11:00 AM
    Yasmin, a beautiful expression and rejuvenation of body, mind and spirit. Simply devine :) congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:30:00 AM
    A beautiful tribute to one of the four elements. Nature writing at its best,love, SuZ

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    Date: 7/6/2013 10:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congratulations on winning.
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:08:00 PM
    YASMIN.... congratulations... from:Linda

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Was a pleasure to read this terrific write of yours Yasmin....I adore your last stanza! Hugs

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 2:59:00 PM
    The stanza next to last is a real beauty..congrats on your HM..( I would have placed this higher) BG

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 12:02:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Yasmin

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:18:00 AM
    this poem would have placed much, much, much higher if it had followed the rules of the contest ( short poem between 3 and 12 lines, ) but it was too lovely not to be mentioned, congrats on your HM Yasmin

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 1:06:00 PM
    A very nice and refreshing poem.. invigorating, and soul pleasing... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 7:24:00 AM
    Flows so nicely. I love reading about the rain..wonderful poem. BG

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Very wishes in the contest

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:48:00 AM
    I really enjoyed reading the 3rd stanza where you changed your rhyming scheme to enhance the write to the abba rhyme, very nicely done my friend, you successfully done that I believe! My favorite lines, there are a plethora but I must pick one... "...misting the air with crystal drops..." that is a tremendous line there, I just love that line so much! You have given us the awesome feel of rain within your piece, I loved reading this write quite much this morning, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 1:56:00 AM
    - Beautifully written in the rain, Yasmin! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a happy new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)