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Rain

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Below is the poem entitled Rain which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Rain

desirable rain
giver and taker of life ...
refreshes your soul 

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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:33:00 AM
    I like how you took parts of your previous poem and created a Haiku from it...I must admit that you took the best parts of your previous poem to make this awesome write! You have crafted a tremendous piece, what a delightful poem here Seren my friend, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/27/2013 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Russell, i am not good at Haiku but I persevere.....Seren