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In the rain

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In the rain


Beyond the distance
becomes the drops of mistle;
beloved existence.

her verse and songs fly
where flowers blossom splendid;
fiancée oaths reply.
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Her lone figure stands -
she spreads her hands out to reach
the fields of far lands.

Conceived caress on hair
unending oceanic paths -
her eyes upwards stare.
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On boat's seaward trail -
pure mistle she loved amidst
mizzen and main sail.

I kiss her smile in rain -
approaches in dusk conceived 
spelling our refrain.
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© G. V. 05-26-2013

Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name: Kissing In The Rain
Placement: 1st
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Pics 3, 6, 7
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  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:59:00 PM

    Fine haiku here - good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 8:45:00 AM

    My belated hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win and outstanding haiku my dear friend, Giorgio! It's my honor sharing with you this awesome win! I extremely love your haiku and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing as well. love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:32:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning senual work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:32:00 PM

    Many Congrats to you on your outstanding win. AO

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:00:00 AM

    oh yes,I had just seen this recently. Well, WAY TO GO, big congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Congratulations, Giorgio on your first place in PD contest, " In the rain . " Its vivid imagery carries one to that magic place that only a romantic like would create from very poetic words. I have enjoyed reading it. Best Wishes, Andrew.

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 7:17:00 AM

    Excellent composition with attracting words

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 5:55:00 AM

    Congratulations

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 2:20:00 AM

    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:58:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:05:00 PM

    hmmm, i never heard of mistle before. Only of mistletoe. Wonder what it could be. You were greatly inspired by PD's contest. My favorite part was the third one where her hands reach out, and I loved the line in the fourth one: unending oceanic paths. Awesome!

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 9:53:00 AM

    Beautiful haiku, Giorgio! - Thank you - Luck in contest !!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 6:17:00 AM

    Nicely written. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 5:04:00 AM

    I'll have to check back later..Sara