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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:07:00 PM
    Good job at writing a very scary work..Reads like a winner to me..Very suspenseful..Thanks for your visits to my work..Your reviews always are encouraging and uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 12:43:00 PM
    The situation is so frightening that that will bound one to keep up at night. Wonderfully done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 8:59:00 AM
    You know, when I walk into a Walmart on a Saturday, I feel the same way this writing made me feel. Frighteningly aware and terribly nervous. :) This was extremely intense! Wonderful job!

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 8:28:00 PM
    This is such a terrifying and scary write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this immensely wondrous and incredibly frightening poem! What a horribly bad situation this poor group of home owners got into, such an awesome description this piece is! Great Work!!