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Passionate Haiku contest

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Passionate Haiku contest

Picture one

laying side by side
Lips lost in pure ecstasy 
unaware of rain


Picture six

passion raining down
lips gorge on delicious neck
more than water rising

PD kissing in the rain contest

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 9:27:00 PM

    weeeee :-) PD

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 10:32:00 AM

    Well pictured. Good luck! AO

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/26/2013 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 6:58:00 AM

    Exalted passion and sumptuous lines!! Am drawn towards 'more than water rising'.. Great job done, Richard!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/26/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am glad you liked my little poems.
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:38:00 AM

    what I love about these are the last line of each one. They rocked!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/26/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 10:59:00 PM

    Great minds think alike...yes..the same two pictures captivated me; however, I wrote about image six only. We can do that, right???? Of course...with that "more than water rising" I don't stand a chance.... ;)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/26/2013 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes in fact I don't know if I have done it wrong by choosing two. Thanks for commenting Eileen.
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 5:17:00 PM

    Very sensual and captivating. Passion is the potion running through each line. This is awesome for the contest. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Gail, I hope you are in the middle of an excellent weekend.
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 4:12:00 PM

    peeling the layers of passion with tender and flaming lines.. womderfu;, richard!..:) huggs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2013 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Nette, hugs Rick
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 10:31:00 AM

    with 6 lines passion rains . Thank you for the encourage on my ABC

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure Manel
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 9:49:00 AM

    ... more than water rising... HMM! I will have to think about that (LOL!). Great last finishing lines in these... good luck!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/25/2013 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I had fun with these.