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A bright light engulfs the room
and suddenly disappears
ushering a blazing essence 
that  abruptly evolves in the atmosphere,
buttons unlatched 
zippers break loose
shirts collapses over skirts
flesh dancing in flesh
flesh devouring flesh
and impatient breath 
whispering soft words in her ears.
Electrified
mesmerized
enraptured
emotions bathing in emotion
exotic moment intoxicated with fear.
listen carefully and tell me what you hear?
sounds thundering beyond steep mountains
doors hammering speechless voices 
debris flying high in the air,
but they lie there firing  on without fear.
Lights grow dim
and a mysterious sound chime in.
Pum  Pum  Pum
It must be the voice of an angel 
walking up and down his gigantic chest,
kindling a soft fire that rips aimlessly through their ears.
It captivates their emotion
and enflame their burning passion.
dancing and prancing 
skipping and dipping 
sliding and gliding
they went to the extreme.
Eyes fixed in a steadfast motion
calculating the mysterious sound
chest pressing against chest
chest pounding upon chest
spilling tears of joy all over her face.

©2013 Christine Phillips

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  1. Date: 8/31/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Need a fan to cool me off after this read, Lol... What else can I say but, AAHHHHH!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:38:00 PM
    It makes me think of war and when humans have a brief window to express their passion they take it. Damn the flying bombs! I have never known war but I can imagine when death is looming close you feel things with greater intensity. I felt that in your poem.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:29:00 PM
    It was a fun read put me in mind of Disney cartoon with dancing clothing.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 9:31:00 AM
    A wonderful romantic poem you have penned. You could feel the sizzle in the room. LOL love phyl

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 3:00:00 AM
    beautiful poetry, a joy to read....

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:16:00 AM
    very passionate writing. and now your comment on my rain haiku makes even MORE sense to me!! I like how you truly SHOW instead of just say it. Sign of a great poet.

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 4:54:00 PM
    the heat n steam, that parts the dream, the puntuation stills, the tortured breath, till stillness yet, when all have got their fill, and love surfs oer the hill, in rapture of the thrill, so says the daffodill... Don re: Show Me....Christine Phillips

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 7:50:00 AM
    A plethora of emotions demanding instant gratification from hearts ready to comply! Divine!

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 7:43:00 AM
    This is a professional level poem It scored 1.64 on the Poetry Assessor http://115.146.95.34/poetry/