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ecstasy

                 
                  Amber rays seeping through the grey woods
                     Blending with the glimmering mist
                       Crystal white floating wool packs conceal
                          Dazzling Diamonds time to time
                             Elegantly gowned in white silk
                               Fairies dancing beneath 
                                 Glittering golden moon
                                    High above the trees
                                      Immense ecstasy
                                       

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  1. Date: 5/26/2013 12:42:00 AM

    I really loved the pattern you gave this one. It really enhanced it, and the images here are really pretty.

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:41:00 AM

    - Proficient Manel .... ABC poem is not easy to write. - Well done! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes it is difficult but this is a challenge. Thank you Lisa. I love your puppy haiku
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:00:00 AM

    No it's not too long! When I write ABC I typically go through the whole alphabet, A-Z, so no worries!

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Tim. Really appreciate.
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 6:20:00 AM

    Bravo, you have penned a lovely romantic poem. I agree with Tim it has a whimsical feel. I hope you enter it into the contest.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. You are very generous
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 5:02:00 AM

    Choreography of sentences dancing in unison! Excellent!

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my dear!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 11:14:00 PM

    It's very whimsical writing, Manel. And I enjoy the neat little shape you have created (almost like a teacup that's been slightly chipped on the right side). I think the strongest lines were the first two... enjoyed!

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 5/25/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Tim. I enjoy all your poems.