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haiku 3

no phone call needed
secret of hidden key known
teddy bear on bed

©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Love this style . Haiku is an awesome style and you made it sound awesomer by your simple words (that expose inspiration to the public). This sounds like you had a relaxing day that day. Calming poem and I like it very much. :) DWB

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:27:00 PM
    I'm always impressed by a good hai ku writer. My friends, that's you :)

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 12:05:00 AM
    I used to have the biggest stuffed animal collection (sometimes I miss the feelings I got from it... though "unmanly" to admit... lol). A good description of home, methinks! A familiar friend who's always there... good haiku!

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 7/8/2013 7:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha me too! Stuffies are genius.
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Two hearts in kind wont seem to mind when distance is in trust. An hour or two until your due. And arms around you thrust.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes..thanks....
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Excellent and interesting haiku enjoyed a lot. Lovely worded. Congrats on your win. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir..
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 6:29:00 AM
    Hummmm!!! I could go so many ways with this one from scary to safety..Enjoyed reading this one that was intriguing this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I believe that you got my Cinquain "Toys"..Not many did...Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well I hope its not too scary....its an extra key to the house I'm talking about, maybe that helps...and your toys the write struck home because my hubby has had not one but two TOY corvettes but finally traded back toa sensible truck....thanks Sara
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved win. AO

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks sir
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Love it Donna--teddy bears do mean love don't they! Congrats

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah....especially the ones moms keep of ours....thanks Craig
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:01:00 PM
    Donna what a lovely home sweet home Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Connie
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:54:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/28/2013 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph...:-)
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/28/2013 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much ..
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:21:00 PM
    - Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/28/2013 5:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very kind Anne Lise
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:18:00 PM
    Excellent, well done, a beautiful Haiku. Congrats on your win.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/28/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 1:05:00 PM
    My big hearty congratulations my dear friend , Donna for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/28/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the honor and for having us Leonora
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 9:14:00 AM
    A poem of mixed emotions i sense,, anyhow love the imagery it has created for me..

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/28/2013 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Harry...so good to see ya...thanks! Maybe the custom of leaving an extra house key hidden under a stone or something is only customary around here...
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:46:00 PM
    Have you found your soul mate? That must be divine! Excellent writing! Good luck!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/28/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I did once...thanks Demetrios ....
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 9:24:00 PM
    That's not necessarily a child's teddy bear though...because I have a teddy bear in our room that my wife gave me for my birthday one year...I keep it in the room to remind me of our romance that we share with one another! Ok, yeah, I usually sleep with it...don't tell anyone but I'm a softy! I know, does that make me any less of a man that I love my teddy bear...from my wife? This poem is awesome Donna, I really loved reading it this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/25/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nope...no less of a man!!! More!!!! And as for its for the home contest...I'm glad you find it reminds you of home...me too......my teddy's name is Matilda! Thanks Russell..