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Kissing in the Rain

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Below is the poem entitled Kissing in the Rain which was written by poet Elai Cee. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Kissing in the Rain

                                                     
                                                     Under the rain’s song
                                               Witnessing the gay moonlight
                                                     Our kiss called blue sky

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                                                     "Tik, tik" naughty rain
                                                Giving romance for lovers
                                                    Sticky kiss is reigned
                                            
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                                              Breeze's dancing around them
                                                By the crystal drops of rain
                                                 Hide eye longed warm lips 



Kissing in the Rain Haiku's contest entry
Used picture # 5 for the first haiku
Used picture # 1 and 2 for the second haiku
Used picture # 3 for the third haiku

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  1. Date: 4/6/2014 7:24:00 AM
    3 very good haiku; I notice that you have a soft spot for this form :) cu // paul

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Elai a beautiful image you've given within this tight format; wonderful!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 1:00:00 PM
    I can see by past comments this poem did you well in the contest, but its success is also quite evident by the beautiful words here. Very Good! MC

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Your 'poetical drops' are falling in my heart. Incoming beauties. LOVE it!

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 7/24/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ellie
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on this win.

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 7/24/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Richard happy to see you here
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:26:00 AM
    And this one is a gem :) You have a fan here Regards -Shiraz

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 7/24/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ur gem too
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:34:00 PM
    Much effort went into this winning work..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Congrats..Sara

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 6/1/2013 7:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Sara
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Very nicely done. AO

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi thank you really appreciate it!
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:16:00 AM
    Congrats for your win, Elai.

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/30/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea...
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 12:55:00 AM
    Hi...wew! Thank you all... I don't expect it... well, thank you again especially to the beautiful and awesome LINDA! God bless us all!---from having a sweet smile---ELAI

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 2:46:00 AM
    Congratulations. Rick

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 2:07:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 9:36:00 PM
    Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Elai, I love the pouring sound of your poem, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:56:00 AM
    Wonderful haiku on kissing in the rain. If for contest, good luck my friend. Thanks.....,loved always,bl

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/29/2013 12:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks BL
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 5:06:00 PM
    this is more than woderful....great poetic appeal..:) huggs

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/25/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you net...miss ur comment! aprreciate it so much!
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 5:32:00 AM
    Dont u find it weird we're not speaking in Tagalog? Sana manalo ka sa contest. ;3

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/25/2013 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    salamat
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Hi Elai, I so much like the beginning of your Haiku... Nice one.... Much love

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/25/2013 12:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Chuma...appreciate it!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:14:00 PM
    delightful You are indeed talented...

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/24/2013 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Judy... i'm kinda not satisfied bout my works...hmmm
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Heart-warming with a side of delicious! :) Fantastic!

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/24/2013 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Drake.. I pleased you lol..
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