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haiku 5

legs pounding soaking
hand clasp lost in wet retreat …
run b***h or get wet

lips wet glistening
rain drops meet and meld as one …
kisses in the rain

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© 24/05/2013 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 11:46:00 AM
    I am not trying to be rude by not commenting on your actual poetry at the moment(why wouldn't she like these? lol), dropping by to say that your blog 'tantrum' is a very pertinent topic. I replied to your blog. The answer is SO easy. There is a filter script that admin can get their techies to add free of charge. It works simply. If someone posts 100 poems at once, all 100 poems show-up on his/her poem list, but only 3 poems(the amount can be set and changed)show up on the public list. Easy!

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 10:33:00 AM
    i like these Mandy,, they are so creative, and the imagery is spot on...

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great work..Very creative indeed..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:35:00 AM
    hey Mandy, I thought I just saw this someplace else!! someone else who used the b**ch word. haha. I don't know why this one wouldn't get on the list as well!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/29/2013 1:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha it was one that was obviously not to her taste lol xx
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 9:29:00 PM
    Very good Mandy! Will do well!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Pity she didn't like it Donna but thanks xx
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 9:11:00 AM
    PD will love this !! She likes pushing the boundaries ......this one does just that!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha obviously she didn't Carrie love but thanks for thinking she may xx
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Choreography of kisses, explosion of hearts cooled by rain! Marvelous! Good luck, Mandy! Thank you!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks demetrios
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 2:59:00 PM
    love these, Mandy. Sorry to hear you had flu and hope you're fully recovered now. congrats on your wins, my friend

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack hope you are well xx
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:35:00 PM
    Always lovely tasting kisses in the rain, Nice haiku's Mandy xxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Must try it Mystic lol xx
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 10:55:00 AM
    .... soooo sweet Mandy ! - Read my suggestion, if you want. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi and thanks Ann Lise xx
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Amazing write, such an incredible write my friend! I just love the images you paint with this enlightening poem Mandy! What a delightful and charming piece, Great Work!!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 5/28/2013 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Russell xx